| 2019-09-06 20:58:53 |
Ronnie 1 (Amusement Park)
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People need to loosen up. In real life, yes, you definitely need consent, but it was implied here by the author for drama and romance. Yes, he should be responsible, but Ronnie is so compelling that she drove him to be irresponsible. Anyway, it's really no different than most Hollywood sex scenes, for better or worse. There are worse authors to go after. I hope this story will continue, hehe! |
| 2019-09-13 23:54:28 |
Teasing Dad with my friends
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Enjoying this series! It might be a little late at this point, but some of the girls should be a little bit different from each other. Make one shy and quiet, especially since they're young, inexperienced teens. They should be hesitantly exploring this new world of sexuality. You could make another one lewd and loud-mouthed, or maybe make one reluctant but secretly aroused. That way they have some more personality. I hope you keep this going! |
| 2019-09-14 00:00:21 |
Teasing Dad with my Friends, part II
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Love to read daddy-daughter. I hope more dads, or maybe some little sisters, get involved soon. |
| 2019-09-21 00:19:24 |
Going Nova ch. 4: Dad’s Swimming Trunks
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I’m glad you’re enjoying it so far! I have more plot than the average story. I know it’s not to everybody’s tastes, but my hope is that you’ll get attached to the characters, their personalities, and their arcs. That said, I suspect you’ll enjoy the next chapter quite a bit! |
| 2019-10-24 01:24:15 |
Movie Night 4
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This series is very fun. I love the silly moments interspersed with the hot sex. I can’t wait to read more. |