| 2018-01-05 08:11:30 |
I Love Lucy
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Uh, what even was the point of Jim in this story? |
| 2018-01-07 02:39:45 |
My Little Sister at the Nude Beach._(1)
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Why even mention that she has to crap? That’s not sexy. It’s the opposite of sexy. There are a million better, not-thinking-about-poop ways to get away from the beach. |
| 2018-02-09 07:40:32 |
"Magic Words"
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You probably want to toss this story to an editor, too. Like any noteworthy sex act, it needs a second pair of eyes. |
| 2018-06-05 00:25:29 |
I love you playing with daddy 3
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Some of the better stories on here lately. Looking forward to a part 4 any day now. Your baby girl needs to play. |
| 2018-07-09 23:50:26 |
I didn't know...
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This really needs a second part. The little girl deserves to know what the good feeling feels like. You don’t need to go overboard with a 20-part epic, but a part 2 would be well-received. Maybe some Aladdin would inspire you. Jasmine was only 15! |