| 2020-08-21 16:37:33 |
Family Trip to Jamaica - Part 4 {Fixed}
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Really enjoying this series. I hope it keeps going for a while longer! |
| 2020-08-21 18:50:13 |
A Story of the Paper Vow
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Wowowow, this was incredibly erotic and romantic. It was the perfect balance. Nicely done, though yes, the technical aspects of your writing could use some editing. But even so, it didn't spoil the quality of the story. Hope to read much more from you! |
| 2020-08-21 19:16:05 |
New Employee Part 1: Hired.
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Yeah, this one needs to keep going! |
| 2020-08-28 18:12:08 |
Family Trip to Jamaica- Part 5
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Enjoyed the sensual build-up between father and daughter in this chapter. I hope this continues for some time! |
| 2020-11-02 17:12:54 |
Family Trip to Jamaica Part 6
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Your writing is so good. You have a great handle on your personalities, and the sex is well-described. Definitely among the better stories to be published on this site in recent months! I hope you keep writing for a long time. |