| 2018-09-17 15:50:15 |
The Love Shared (Part 8)
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Come on, you knew this was going to happen since part one, yet here you still are reading chapter 8. Give in, and just let people enjoy the fiction. |
| 2018-09-18 00:23:55 |
The Love Shared (Part 11)
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The twist is that Doc is just as much a scumbag as his father. |
| 2018-09-18 19:35:06 |
My Reluctant Sister_(0)
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This was a thrilling story. I like how you described her reluctance gradually shifting to willingness and desire. The ending should have come back around, though. Instead of her just asking for sex again, she should have brought Mitch Lance’s phone with a new set of sexy photos to “pay off”. |
| 2018-09-29 16:31:25 |
Virgin Exhibitionist
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Good story, though you could sub out the number of different incidents with more detail to the orgasms. You should write a sequel, this time with more involvement from her brother and maybe her mother and father, too. |
| 2018-10-04 00:08:05 |
The Bouncy Game Part II
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Wow, I thought for sure they’d make mommy join in the fun. Just so she’d be culpable, too, and couldn’t spoil the fun by tattling on them. It would have been depraved, too, though the spitting was a nice touch. |