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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-24 17:56:10 | Cumming on Sister_(0) | There's no way the parents didn't know what was up. Making donuts? Then where are the donuts? Where are the baking supplies? Where is the frying vat? Either the parents are dumb as shit, or they're a gold medal mom and dad who are cool with their offspring fucking each other. This needs some major proofreading. You have about a quarter as many periods as you need in there. And there's no build-up. There's no personality in any of your characters. |
| 2018-08-04 00:04:03 | Tales of an Unethical Hypnotist - Chapter 1 | Pretty good start, but not really interested in the wife. I hope this series pays off. |
| 2018-08-24 16:28:28 | Rose's Video Chapter 1: Lil Likes What She Sees_(1) | “Fudge, I just came,” has to be the best line I’ve ever read in a sex story. |
| 2018-08-25 23:43:56 | The Bouncy Game | Dang, this needs better writing form, but the idea is still good. Made me cum each new step of the way. I bet Mommy is willing to be a bit depraved to win her husband back from her minx of a daughter. |
| 2018-09-05 23:33:12 | Amylia The Gamer Geek | Surprisingly easy to follow considering the crimes against grammar this story commits. |