| 2018-12-14 17:52:07 |
Hearts
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Hey JBL, welcome to the site. You're story is a great first publication, and definitely earned a positive from me. That being said, you really need to spell-check your work, and also use quotations for dialogue. Other than that, very good story. The sex is intense, the narrative moves quickly, and the characters are believable. |
| 2019-03-28 19:37:16 |
Agent of Lilith: Chapter 11
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First time back on this site for a few months, and I was glad to see this story was still going. I took a few hours to read it to this point, and it was well worth it. Very well written, wonderfully paced, and erotic as all hell. |
| 2019-03-31 21:47:55 |
The Chauffeur (#34) The Aftermath
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Spent the better part of today and yesterday at work reading this series. So far, it is fantastic. Your writing style is wholly your own, and the characters are reflective of that, but still distinct. One of the pitfalls of writing on this site is that you feel forced to make things episodic, and there was a little of that in your story that interrupted the flow, but otherwise the narrative stayed on course. I eagerly await your next installment. |
| 2019-04-13 23:54:38 |
Queen Yavara: Chapter 4
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Lol that's fine. Ratings don't matter much to me. I'd take 80% and a single good review over 95% and no feedback at all. I write because I enjoy it, not because of numbers on a blue screen. |
| 2019-04-13 23:55:48 |
Queen Yavara: Chapter 6
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Thanks for the kind words, Post. |