| 2017-07-03 17:10:36 |
Queen Yavara: Chapter Twenty-Five_(1)
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I'm sorry for any spelling and grammatical errors. I proof-read the chapters before I submit, but sometimes I still miss things. |
| 2017-07-04 08:35:30 |
Queen Yavara: Chapter Eleven_(1)
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@Robsam1991 Thanks for the constructive criticism. I'd like to clear some things up though. The story is ultimately about Yavara's corruption and seduction to evil. She enjoys doing bad things because of the power it gives her. In chapter five, she has to be convinced by Zander to stop playing with Prestira's body after she gains control of her. Prestira is a willing participant in much of it, but I wanted to imply that Yavara revels in control and power, much like her sister. In later chapters, if you care to read them, you see Yavara delve deeper into her sadistic side. I thought I'd made the transition smooth enough, but I'm still fairly new to writing. Once again, thank you for your thoughts and comment. |
| 2017-07-19 19:34:53 |
God is a Slut Chapter 2: Rachel's Darkest Fantasy_(1)
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Post feedback, critiques or suggestions here. The third installment will be out soon, depending on how long it takes for the admins to approve it. Thank you all for reading! |
| 2017-07-21 16:18:37 |
Queen Yavara: Adriana's Story (chapters 25-28)
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lol whoops. I meant pedals. Sometimes I'll wire shudder instead of shutter. I go through the story looking for errors before I post, but I always miss some, sorry about that. |
| 2017-09-14 14:19:37 |
It's Not Rape If I Like It.
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This is a one-shot. I'm going to finish up the God is a Slut series, and then maybe I'll write the final few chapters of the Queen Yavara series (though I have written a chapter of that in over two months), and then I'll be done with series stories for a while. |