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Comments from White Walls
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-14 18:43:15 | Queen Yavara: Chapter 4 | "Grinded" isn't technically a word, but it is the past participle of "grind" when using it to express grinding hips, which is technically the improper usage of that word. I had to look this one up to make sure. In terms of "grinding hips," "ground" isn't used. You are right about "gaged" though, that should be "gauged." I carefully reread all of my works, but I'm not perfect. Thanks for pointing it out. |
| 2019-05-22 17:47:18 | Agent of Lilith: Chapter 15 - Finale_(5) | An excellent to a fantastic series. Lilith and James were both compelling characters, the structure was sound, the narrative was focused, and the sex extremely well written. The ending was satisfying, though I would've loved to have seen more of Ishtar than just the last two chapters. I can't wait to see what you can do in another genre, and eagerly anticipate your next works. |
| 2019-06-20 05:59:36 | Double cream | Not really my thing, but it was well written and tenderly erotic. Bravo. |
| 2019-06-20 06:01:43 | Double cream | I would give you positive vote right now, but I gave my daily allotment to Pablo Diablo's Chauffeur series lol. Tomorrow for sure. Keep writing dude, and don't let haters ever discourage you. |
| 2019-07-06 04:42:33 | Queen Yavara: Chapter 28 | Adrianna is getting a stand alone (optional read, just character and lore building), and book 4 of the main story, or parts ten through twelve on this site, will come out after. I am changing how things culminate, since in the original I felt that the cataclysmic even happened too suddenly. Thanks for reading! |