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Comments from throatHER
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2019-01-28 05:31:47 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 2 | Wow, Aganell Brigette that is one hell of a review! Much appreciated. Will be taking your comments in strong consideration for Chapter 3 which is coming along nicely. |
2019-01-28 09:50:59 | The Chauffeur(#5).......Jill | Good Chapter. FYI I'm not sure but I do not believe you can find out the gender of a baby in 7 to 8 weeks. The earliest is 12 weeks and that is cutting it close. Usually during mid- pregnancy 16 to 20 weeks the Obstetrician knows for sure. Technical stuff but other than a good chapter. On to the next! |
2019-01-29 16:07:02 | The last time I fucked my ex_(0) | A good fuck story but you have to work on your sentence structure a bit more. Too many 'I' this and 'I' that. The sex portion was good but the overall story needs some finesse. Good job overall. Positive vote from me. |
2019-01-30 08:09:53 | Drafted Part 1 | Tina, You are, without a shadow of a doubt, one of thee FINEST writers on this site! Eloquently written and superbly together. As a writer myself, this was a master class in storytelling. Bravo! |
2019-01-30 22:13:26 | Drafted Part 2 | Another fantastic chapter! Great writing! |