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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-16 06:10:56 | The Chauffeur(#3)...... First Day/ Jill | A very good read and much better chapter than the previous two. Well Done! Onto Part 4. |
| 2019-01-16 15:18:37 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 2 | @paintballjock thanks for the feedback. My goal is to make this an extended series about the trials and tribulations of a highschooler trying to find his way in the world. Erotica is involved but not the main aspect of his journey. I'm ecstatic about the feedback I'm getting from my stories so far. Thank you all for voting. |
| 2019-01-16 15:18:56 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 2 | @paintballjock thanks for the feedback. My goal is to make this an extended series about the trials and tribulations of a highschooler trying to find his way in the world. Erotica is involved but not the main aspect of his journey. I'm ecstatic about the feedback I'm getting from my stories so far. Thank you all for voting. |
| 2019-01-18 03:15:45 | What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 2 | The Post, Thanks for the feedback. I understand the anticipation of getting to face his friends. Chapter 3 will deal with and much, much more. Introducing Taylor in this chapter was key as she will be vital character in chapters to come. Thanks again for the feedback! |
| 2019-01-18 06:29:04 | The Chauffeur(#4)......Tina and Those Crazy Clients | My only criticism is the reconciliation part between Tina and Jill. I felt it was rushed. After all that time they felt ill-will towards one another and David solved it in mere minutes. Other than that it was a terrific chapter. On to the next! |