| 2018-11-25 01:56:10 |
Damn, Another Frustrating Night
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I like the theme of your story. My only critque would be to work on sentence structure. You start almost every sentence with 'I'. Change it up a little to make the story flow better. Good job |
| 2018-11-27 23:19:58 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 1
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I'm working on it |
| 2018-11-28 11:31:27 |
The Perks of Being a Teacher- Part 1
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Nice build up to the next chapter |
| 2018-11-30 09:17:05 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 1
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Thank you guys for the feedback. I enjoyed writing this story. Currently in the midst of Chapter 2 now and will hopefully have it completed by the middle of next week. Thanks again! |
| 2018-12-07 08:43:57 |
Best friends mom_(1)
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Good story |