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Comments from Ian Moone
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-01-10 23:04:19 | Cory and Tilly_(1) | Cheers for those wonderful comments guys, part two is underway as we speak so I hope it doesn't disappoint. I really appreciate you all taking the time to read and review my work. Ian |
| 2016-01-12 23:24:48 | Cory and Tilly_(1) | The plot for Part 2 is finalised and I'm just under 1,000 words in. I can't give a deadline on when it will be completed, it's not something I want to rush. I want the words to come naturally, but I hope to have a second part with you before the months end. Thanks for all your support. I.M |
| 2016-01-11 08:01:50 | Cory and Tilly_(1) | Thank you, Araxala, and all of you, for those comments. You've made my day. I will bear each one in mind when writing the second part. Cheers I.M |
| 2016-01-11 18:13:59 | The Great Blackmail_(1) | I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the piece. I'm not going to shy away from the fact that the storyline is very dark, but as a writer I think it's important to experiment with the very darkest of plots. I've said before, the taboo subjects that I write about are to get me and my audience to a position they've never been to before. It's fiction, after all. And in comparison to others on this website (which I won't mention for obvious reasons) it's a stroll in the park on a summers day. This was intended to be a dark trilogy. Naturally, not for everyone's tastes. In regards to your second point; it's hardly "kiddy fiddling paedophilia." It's a dark, sinister piece, I grant you. But Maddie forces herself on her brother via blackmail. It's not like he's fondling her while she sleeps. If it makes you feel better I'll remove Charlie's age completely, thus restoring balance to the universe? Appreciate the comments as always. I.M |
| 2016-01-12 17:55:45 | Cory and Tilly_(1) | Thank you all, I appreciate each comment and I hope I don't disappoint with the next chapter of Cory and Tilly's journey. Cheers Ian (I.M) |