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Comments from ActuallyFakeBanana
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-03-23 06:12:41 | My obsession with Ass's | 1: Learn how to write dialogue. 2: Learn how to use grammar. 3: What the fuck is wrong with you? |
| 2018-03-25 04:59:10 | A Sorcerer in Downtown Atlanta Ch. 9 | Ha, political jokes... |
| 2018-03-25 18:38:28 | Welcome to the Jungle | 1: That was terrible 2: What the fuck is wrong with you |
| 2018-03-29 05:46:23 | A Traveler's Tale - chapter 1: The Swiss Three way | You only need to start a new line for dialogue with a new speaker. However, you only did that a couple times and the rest of the story was fantastic. |
| 2018-04-02 04:53:23 | What Started As A Joke | Learn to write dialogue |