| 2015-05-23 18:27:23 |
Two Boys and their Dad (Part 2)
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Wow!! On to number three it is!!! |
| 2015-06-04 02:31:42 |
An Unexpected Turn...
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Try slowing down and kind of dragging out the teasing a little bit longer...also be sure to lease a space in between paragraphs so it's easier to read...but other than that it's a good start... |
| 2015-07-02 03:43:04 |
Beach Photography Part 2
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Wow oh wow! that was fucking hot! please rite more and more! Keep me cuming...lol |
| 2015-07-06 20:09:18 |
Blurred Lights - 1 - Homecoming
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Wow. That was amazing. Love it went back and forth between the two old friends. And now the cliff hanger. Can't wait to read the other stories! |
| 2015-07-07 00:23:20 |
Blurred Lights - 2 - It's My Life
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I'm totally at a lost for words rite now...while I was reading it felt like I was watching a movie going back and forth...on to the next story!!! |