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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2016-02-18 04:14:19 | Asian Mom Jenny and her son Chris Series 3: Part 4 | chapter 5 is submitted! It'll be available whenever the site updates. Thanks for all the feedback and suggestions, it really does help move the story along for me and gives me ideas of what scenes to include. Hope you enjoy the next chapter |
| 2016-02-18 23:02:50 | Asian Mom Jenny and her son Chris Series 3: Part 5 | I didn't even realize that the first chapter was missing, thanks for bringing it to my attention. I'll submit it to the mods ASAP and hopefully it'll be up a few days or so. Regarding what to do with Charles, as someone clarified, for the second option he's not falling back in love with Jen, its just that he's now physically attracted to her. Also forever316, don't worry. Even in the second scenario, Charles wouldn't be liking it. Not only does he hate the fact that he actually finds Jen hot, but her never letting him touch her makes it even worse for him as he's almost forced to watch her perform more lewd acts with Chris. So unlike most cuckold relationships, there's no enjoyment for him, its just painful, but he can't really pull himself to look away. But again, I haven't decided which way to go yet, so any opinions on the matter is definitely helpful. |
| 2016-02-19 12:46:56 | Asian Mom Jenny and her son Chris Series 3: Part 5 | wow, let's of suggestions. Ok let's get to it. It's a little too soon to talk about getting married. Not is Chris too young, where it'd be illegal, but Jenny and Chris have only been together for just less than half a year. So for the island getaway suggestion, I appreciate all the thought behind it, but it's too much of a setting change for the story. And it'd be delving into a realm where as an author, I don't know enough about to write about properly. For the comment of the action being too slow, sorry but this is my style with this story. Even in series 1, Jen and Chris don't have sex until end of chapter 3. I like building and introducing new kinks slowly. Chris being more okay with public sex, Jenny being slutty in front of an audience, and especially cuckolding Charles takes time. I would never write it so that Jen kisses Chris in front of Charles one day and two days later is having sex in front of him. That's not my style and even for erotic fiction, not believable. |
| 2016-02-19 12:54:00 | Asian Mom Jenny and her son Chris Series 3: Part 5 | For the suggestion of messing with Charles' food, I do intend to do it, just waiting for the best opportunity because I don't think it will be too big of a theme. It may appear a few times here and there, but not a central theme I'm exploring in the future. As for posting on another site, if you have a suggestion, I might check it out. It'll depend a lot on audience size as like most authors, I'd like for more people to check out my work. Also just remember that even though the site updates slower than before, it still takes a lot of time on my end to write and edit each chapter. So the extra day or two you have to wait because of the site, shouldn't be that big of a deal. As always, I really enjoy reading your suggestions and comments. They help give me ideas and motivate me to write more. Thanks and appreciate all the feedback. |
| 2016-02-21 15:53:43 | Asian Mom Jenny and her son Chris Series 3: Part 5 | I've re-submitted the first chapter already, will be there once the site updates. |