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Comments from Happy Rabbit
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-05-04 15:58:16 | Two Tales About Jack And Mary | Both Storyies ar very good as type off writing called Comparison and Contrast. I both the girl is safe in the end. I believe that both should be further developed, either togeather or seperately. Further Charecter development as in what does Jack do for a living. Also the development of Mary as herself and not just a Sexual being in both stories. I am glad that she does not have thee perfact body and is described as thick. I have always liked thick. |
| 2011-05-06 17:37:13 | My step-sister Sara! | I think this is a really good story. You have alot of Natural Talent. I do not think any body ever should get Raped. It is wrong and just as wrong in fiction. Those that like to read about Rape have no REspect for Women, Female Teens, Girls, their Mothers or Themselfs. I like free willing and very happy sex. Talking about Dick Size is okay but keep it relevent. |
| 2011-05-07 20:14:54 | This is a very good story, well written and tight, and well proof read. I am looking forward to the other parts. I am not sure of you and conversation yet, however you develop and describe nicely. I am looking forward to him doing the sister with the Tattoos. I love mother and Son Sex and think the 37 year old Lawter should have his baby. Girl and Boy Twins of course. You write it and just let it flow. Its in my Favs. Really Really Good. |
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| 2011-05-09 17:09:58 | My Lovely twin. | This was a great Story. This Story was so great with so many twists that I had to read the ending and then go back to the main body of the story. I love Sister Brother Twin Incest Stories. With the female being the aggressor. Happy Sex, happy Ending. In a way you chickened out but in the end nicely redeamed yourself. It was different and the twist where good. Better then She Sucked we fucked that we usually got. Needs a Part 2 for some reason. College is the great seperater. Lots of Incest relationships end about that time, just like, High School Girlfriend Boyfriend Relationships. She goes to School and He goes either to another school or the Factory or the Army. They keep in touvh for a while but after awhile they both know its over and move on. Its kind of like the Waaitress who Supports her Husband through Medical School. In the end He is a Doctor and she is still a Waitress. Two whole different people. Cell Phones make it harder to break away. Great Story |
| 2011-05-11 03:25:32 | Daddy's Little Girlfriend | Good Story! Everyone is different, for some it comes early and for some later, Diffrent time space and season for everyone. Everyone is not the same in a Box. |