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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2022-07-14 13:29:21 | Pikachu Halloween 3 | Hey, Sandstorm. Great story. Please don't stop writing this one before he gets to fuck her pussy, at least. Now, why is it I can't find any of the two previous chapters of this? They are not on your page. I remember reading the first one when you published it, now I can't find it. Maybe you have two many stories there and the website has a limit, who knows. Awesome work. |
| 2022-07-14 13:55:16 | Why there are safety procedures when working with other lifeforms | 1- Hard to say. Although I liked her body shape, the fact she is petite, and her youthfulness, I missed information such as her eyes and hair color, what the parts of her body look like; nipples, pussy (is it shaved?), or even what is the tone of her skin? She also doesn't have dialogues, so saying I liked the girl would be a stretch. Is her overall de***********ion desirable? Yes, for sure. 2- She might have gotten what she wanted, and if the alien's fluids have hallucinogenic or psychotropic properties, she might have enjoyed it (what wouldn't be exactly a good thing if you want her to feel conflicted in an eventual chapter 2. Keep the rape tag, please.) 3- I'm with the doctor. Yes, she deserved this. Of course, THIS IS FICTION. Have to make things very clear. 4- The alien still has many things to try—at least two still unused holes. 5- The whole thing was nice. I like the setting and the theme. You don't see much of this around here. |
| 2022-07-14 14:04:11 | Why there are safety procedures when working with other lifeforms | 6- The scene is too short after the alien finally gets its way. It took the whole story to set up the scene, and it lasted for only one paragraph. The way I see it, at least half the length of a story like this has to be composed of sex scenes. I hoped it had been way longer, with more of her reactions, details, etc. Loved the story. Keep up the good work, and don't get discouraged if the ratings drop. It happened to most of my heavier stories, but there are always people like me who like the extra hardcore stuff. Great job. Oh, and I realized you did mention she was shaved. Naughty Agnes... |
| 2022-07-15 17:06:02 | Stupid Young Whore: Chapter 2 | Hey, DevilsOwn! Pleased to know the title suits the story! I'm working on part 3 already. Thank you! |
| 2022-07-18 19:20:18 | Stupid Young Whore: Chapter 2 | Hi, Graham! Thanks for the tips. I'll add 'Chapter 1' to the title when I submit chapter 3. If I edit now, the website will take the story down until it releases new ones. I'm delighted you like the affectionate dom style. I'm considering something close to one of the options for the future you listed. However, including more characters in the story doesn't always pay off. Around 2011, using another account, I had a story that went up to chapter 10. Many of my readers didn't like how I included more female characters in it (some even asked me to kill them off in favor of the main girl). Let's see how it goes while I consider it more carefully. Conversely, I don't see Daniel wanting - or even in a position - to share Diana. I'll let the story develop a little further and address this again. But, hey, thanks for the comment and the ideas! |