| 2022-05-05 04:15:06 |
Big Bad Dude
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Nothing erotic about your story. It was unpleasant blather. Don’t bother to keep writing |
| 2022-05-05 04:15:20 |
Big Bad Dude
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Nothing erotic about your story. It was unpleasant blather. Don’t bother to keep writing. |
| 2023-06-29 03:29:19 |
What Mom Doesn't Know Will Fuck Her
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Why the hell don't you number the chapters so the reader can go to the next story? Duh. |
| 2023-07-01 14:48:35 |
" Big Sister Cindy Seduces Younger Brother "
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What is the deal with this story? Fake, I guess. I don't understand the point of writing fiction, calling it true, then not finishing it and luring the reader to go to an offsite website. This is fucked up. |
| 2023-07-06 22:47:29 |
The Hike
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Unlike other readers, I did not see the "hook" and did not think this story was well conceived. |