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Comments from PandaKing
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-04-10 07:05:57 | The Power of Science (Chapter 1) - The Story Begins | Pacing and development, your characters feel unnatural, give them time to develop and pace the story a little better. Establish emotions, don’t alwasy explicitly state them, rather, let them be inferred by the reader. Otherwise really good. |
| 2018-06-02 05:28:44 | Jessie_(0) | I liked this, it wasn’t just a quick sex story, but had build to it was enjoyable to read. |
| 2018-10-10 12:10:15 | She treated raped me and made me her prostitute | I like your story, but your English needs work, especially proper punctuation. You also need to work on your delivery and P.O.V, make your sentences short and concise, and easy to understand. |
| 2018-10-10 12:13:58 | The teacher rapes | Exact same as your last story, change the dynamics a little more or people won't look forward to your next story. |
| 2018-10-27 17:47:37 | The Bouncy Game Part II | MAKE MORE add the mom next |