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Comments from mayrender
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-11-08 16:16:36 | Sibling Love Chapter 1 | Thanks for the feedback. I'm working on the second chapter and I'm aiming to make it longer than this one. I agree with anonymous below me, I don't have very good writing skills, but there is only one way to get better and that way is by writing. The only way to get better at something is do practice it. |
| 2015-11-11 19:31:54 | Sibling Love Chapter 1 | Thanks for the feedback - I have used said advice in chapter two; which I do believe is out. |
| 2016-03-01 11:47:57 | Sibling Love Chapter 1 | I'm gonna try work on the third chapter again. |
| 2017-10-23 11:53:23 | Well, That Backfired_(1) | Quite an amazing story. I would love a sequal. My old story uses capital names and i received negative feedback for it being too confusing. You used it well and I didn't find myself lost. |