| 2015-10-15 18:18:29 |
Being with Mary
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I like the story but I haven't read too many stories in this type of POV. Good job. |
| 2015-11-12 01:40:57 |
Breaking Out, Breaking In
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A great story which is hard to find on this site now days. Please upload part 2. |
| 2015-11-11 18:37:00 |
Lexi and I - PT1_(1)
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There are a few spelling mistakes but it alright I don't mind, but be careful that this story doesn't becomes strictly about sex. Let us in the characters mind and this story could become a good story which I have not see a lot of on here. |
| 2016-03-16 04:31:55 |
Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - Chapter One
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I've read the original story and loved it. I'm loving this version very much as well. Can't wait till you post the next chapter. Yours Truly, Ryojin |
| 2016-05-31 17:57:17 |
A Family Betrayal Chapter 40
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Glad to see you posted chapter 40. Glad to know you are doing okay and what made you change your mind about posting on here again. Can't wait for the next one. Yours Truly, Ryojin |