| 2015-02-08 20:05:06 |
My neighbor_(4)
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To make your story more readable, highlight just a paragraph and then paste it into the space for the story. Next step . . . hit ENTER twice and then paste another paragraph, and his ENTER twice again and so on. That way it will be much easier for us to enjoy. Just a thought! |
| 2015-02-09 13:47:54 |
Self-Confidence 101
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I have to agree with one of the folks who commented that this was a truly well written story. By selecting a young male and female student to be masterfully manipulated was a great choice, but having it done by a female teacher truly added to the eroticism. Rather than have them already horny, by slowly "turning them on" added to the readers excitement/enjoyment as well. As already shared, this might make for a VERY entertaining series. |
| 2019-05-08 20:46:37 |
TheWay it is Now_(1)
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I wanted to thank you for your constructive criticism on the story entitled "Teen Summer Time Fever". Your criticisms are spot on, and as a result, I will try my best to describe things in a more unique fashion, as opposed to capitalizing "cock" and some of the behaviors of characters . . . acting similarly. Stifflittlepoints P.S. Now that I have found your work, I will not hesitate to comment (almost always positively) in a similar fashion. |
| 2020-03-30 21:10:26 |
Parental Encouragement
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I am a fan of your work. This episode was especially erotic for me. Just imagining watching your daughter few those video clips brought me over the edge. It was exciting having the father react . . . with his growing cock . . . as she examined the videos and pics. The only thing I would have added was her physically touching herself while viewing everything. Can't wait for a sequel! |
| 2021-03-02 21:04:56 |
Relax
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Very excellent story. Time to have her take the lead. |