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Comments from 3dzen
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2014-10-07 01:35:00 | European Nightmare Part V | Your writing get better an d better ant this story is fantastic, great detail and character creations, very well done |
2014-06-25 16:26:45 | European Nightmare Part III | really good stuff, hot erotica. i sent you a pm, not sure if it worked as i se e nothing in sent PM box. Was wondering if you wanted to work together to create some 3D iamags to go along with this story? |
2015-05-16 11:53:43 | The Second Place Sister: Ch. 10 | Very good story, character development, plot, sex all well done one of my favorites and I only have 2 or 3 from the site The only constructive criticism I got for you is that I found myself skipping 9 and half of 10 to get to the ending as it was a bit repetitive for me with Tori and Steph at home. I found myself wanting more of her clinic scenarios; give her a couple more therapy sessions and coercion steps drug her more, video brain washing, the cleaning crew fucking her lol …. . I liked all of it don’t get me wrong maybe just me and my ADD kicking in with the Tori / Steph part a bit to repetitive (for me). This however takes nothing away from the overall story. |
2015-07-05 16:08:32 | Avery | I really like the endings you have on your stories, thisone and the Cherry one, puts a nice twist on reading them through |
2015-12-10 03:02:40 | The Second Place Sister: Full Text | One of the best stories hope you take time to write more like this. |