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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-08-19 02:24:56 | Dogs & how to fuck them (for women) | Diseases can be transmitted between animals and humans as well as from human to animal. A zoonosis (zoonotic disease or zoonoses -plural) is an infectious disease that is transmitted between species from animals to humans (or from humans to animals). In animals herpes virus infections occur in multiple species including dogs, horses, elephants, nonhuman primates, guinea pigs, tortoises, and cats. "We know, for example, that gonorrhea came from cattle to humans. Syphilis also came to humans from cattle or sheep many centuries ago, possibly sexually." The most recent, as well as the deadliest, STD to migrate to humans is HIV, |
| 2014-08-27 20:57:31 | My neighbor, Mrs. West's daughter (part one) | For a first submission the number of errors are insignificant compared to other's. If you have trouble catching them when you reread, try reading aloud. If that doesn't help ask another to read it aloud to you. Maybe you could also choose to only let members comment, to reduce the number of asinine comments. And yes, it was my experience when somehow I ended up in Missoury, that even natives with Literature Masters oft said "I seen it! They seen it too!" |
| 2014-05-15 22:03:01 | Family Paries and Aftermath | Cock size is or should be described less clinically (boy inches as replaced with 'overfilling my grip and eventually filling me almost painfully so") Most measurements stated in real life have me biting my tongue so that I don't point out, one side of the ruler is metric and you aren't suppose to begin at your asshole! Does it feel good? That is a better description, even if it takes more time to relate. |
| 2016-04-16 19:20:38 | Natalie mars trip to the stables | Poorly written edited and no story per se. Only idiot fuck dialogue. Read it out loud to help with technical issues |