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| 2013-06-19 04:43:13 | Explicit powers | Good story, I was left on my appetite, since it was too short. Since I'm french, you're sure not to get grammar comments from me. Looking forward for chapter 2, which will be longer and more explicite, I hope. Keep up the good work ! |
| 2013-06-19 05:03:59 | Explicit Powers Chapter 2 | Again, I felt left out on my appetite. Tell us more. I'll be looking for more chapters, with longer stories. More, more, more... |
| 2013-07-22 02:54:51 | To answer your question, this is my original srory and it hasn't been and will not be published anywhere but here. I am currently working on chapter 2. This story should be taking course over many chapter, as the avatar will have to develop 7 other virtue; compassion, valor, courage, justice, honor, spirituality and humility. On his journey to attain his quest, the Ankh will get him to read the Book of Truth to further develop his skills. Hope you enjoy! |
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| 2013-07-22 21:37:30 | A Haunting Curiosity | Can't wait to see how the second visit will go :) |
| 2013-07-23 12:00:26 | Her Reptiles | MrMac and all the other Anonymous commenters; Did you miss the first descrition of the theme to this story : Fantasy? fantasy (fnt-s, -z) n. pl. fantasies 1. The creative imagination; unrestrained fancy. See Synonyms at imagination. 2. Something, such as an invention, that is a creation of the fancy. 3. A capricious or fantastic idea; a conceit. 4. a. Fiction characterized by highly fanciful or supernatural elements. b. An example of such fiction. 5. An imagined event or sequence of mental images, such as a daydream, usually fulfilling a wish or psychological need. 6. An unrealistic or improbable supposition. To imagine; visualize The author has the privilege to visualize improbable situations when writing a fantasy, not withstanding the laws of of reality. To negatively criticize a fantasy, applying reality laws, is to extinguishe ones imagination, whitch this text is all about. Keep it up and you'll have no text to read in the future. |