| 2011-09-06 10:52:31 |
Sara and Mr. Rostand - The Fun Continues
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Well told tale. As a part time college instructor, this certainly feeds one of my favorite fantasies. His inner Dom seemed to come on a bit quick; a little foreshadowing of that in part one may have helped. Also, her inner slut/sub was quick...maybe a little more on why she was so submissive so quickly...earlier experience, etc. However, please do not take my critique as negative...great story....I hope to read more of your "submissions." Take care. |
| 2017-11-16 22:19:13 |
Game Night_(1)
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Bravo and well done, Akeelah. Your stories always have a sweet blend of realistic plot & descriptions, along with steamy, erotic sex. I'm not a gamer, but I enjoyed this tale immensely. THANKS! |
| 2018-04-14 19:05:35 |
Where the Wild Things Are
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Dayum, Miz Akeelah. Another fine tale about getting tail. Nice banter between the characters. Wish there was a strip club close to my school. |
| 2016-07-20 10:45:30 |
What Hole Do You Want First
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I do hope there are additional submissions with these characters. Thanks. |
| 2017-07-29 13:40:44 |
Dangerouse Night
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Another stellar recounting of your life, Akeelah. I wish my daughter had invited friends like you for sleepovers. Do you still have some of the photos that Lilly's dad took? Or, did Lilly ever take pics of you and her dad together? That'd be a great memento and keepsake. Take care, G |