| 2011-10-09 02:23:44 |
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Thank you for the comments, while I planned to only write this story, I might try to get with another writer and see if we can write a story together. Keep watching, I may surprise myself, as well as a few others, with another story. :) |
| 2011-10-18 22:47:39 |
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To the anonymous poster on 10-16, the 3rd to 1st person was for effect, that's where I wanted to come out of the story and make a major point. I normally don't do that but I thought it might be a nice touch. Thanks for the comment though, I do appreciate feedback. :) |
| 2011-10-19 16:10:40 |
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I can't say whether or not we are going to because I'm not sure yet, but keep an eye out, we may get together and put something out. :)) |