| 2010-09-20 01:43:27 |
My Twin Sister Abby
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Not a bad story but hard to read. Needs some proof reading and more punctuation. |
| 2011-02-23 03:18:20 |
My Little Sisters Friends
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Its areola not aurora. An aurora is a natural light display in the sky, particularly in the polar regions, caused by the collision of charged particles directed by the Earth's magnetic field. |
| 2018-04-27 18:14:23 |
Busted_(2)
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First she was 17 then Fourteen? |
| 2018-04-27 18:14:28 |
Busted_(2)
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First she was 17 then Fourteen? |
| 2018-04-27 15:00:42 |
Down on the farm_(2)
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Too many commas used Incorrectly. Madeit a little hard to read. Good story though. |