| 2009-07-17 01:03:40 |
Teenage Hormones 2
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Fresh, this is really good. keep going with this story and you can have some great things happening. |
| 2009-07-17 01:37:12 |
Watching Little Casey Next Door
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Damn! that was awesome, Imp! One of the best stories on this site by far. |
| 2009-07-28 00:42:00 |
Lily's last summer pt 2: The invintation
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You've got a good story going. Here's a small tip: it's spelled "tongue", i'm just bringing it up now because people will probably get on about bad spelling and stuff. It's okay though, a lot of people aren't the greatest spellers, and you don't have to be to be a good writer. |
| 2009-08-07 01:21:42 |
Kelly 11 years old, wants to copy her parents sex games
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wow, that was really good |
| 2010-07-22 22:53:03 |
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great story, write as long as you'd like and as much as you like, if you enjoy it, there are people out there who enjoy it as well |