2008-10-26 18:16:40 |
Daddy's Tease - Part Two
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Fantastic story but now you need to get both sisters at once.Young english girls realy turn me on |
2014-07-18 21:04:12 |
I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR, OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS!
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Great story, glad you brought it back. |
2014-07-18 20:55:41 |
The Rape Club, Story 1, Robs tale
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In my opinion, this is one of the best stories of this type that I've read on this site in a while. You kept the violence of the act to a perfect minimum. And your concept of a secret organization like the Rape Club was a great idea. Not bad at all for your first story. |
2014-07-14 04:40:19 |
Moving On_(1)
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Read sort of like a Stephen king tale, you've deviated from the norm on this one. I liked it |
2010-08-21 14:16:29 |
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Sorry about spelling and bad grammar but it was my first try .but I've found a new writing program and I'm writing a sequel about the play room coming soon |