| 2022-01-29 21:03:39 |
My Son's Migraines (Ch 5 & Epilogue)
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Great series. Nice, compact chapters, very nice writing. Her erotic feelings really come across and the reader can get into the feeling. Even though she's doing this to an unconscious youth, you still like her and share her compulsion and love the dirty details of the taboo. Her reasoning about a mother's love come across really well: you believe it, yet you kind of know she's making excuses for her own lust and convincing herself, and that was a lot of fun! |
| 2022-01-29 21:05:54 |
My Son's Migraines (Ch 5 & Epilogue)
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However, I agree with arealgasm that the last chapter was a slight letdown. I was kind of hoping, actually, while reading chapters 1 - 4, that you would find a clever way to end the story with him never waking up or finding out. I think the ending is still about as well designed as you could, considering they would become lovers, but could have been more nuanced about how he was seduced. And, imo, it is just not quite as erotic and naughtily taboo as the previous chapters. But, again, her taboo exploits with her sleeping son were hot af! |
| 2022-01-30 00:49:25 |
Earth: Tentacle Breeding Ground - Chapter 5
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This whole series is incredible. So creative and diabolically titillating. So many intense episodes. But I want to point out the Zoey sequence at the end of this chapter where she goes into the pod. That's about the most wonderfully dark, and brilliant erotic writing I have ever read. A perfect way to finish this chapter. |
| 2022-01-30 00:58:15 |
Earth: Tentacle Breeding Ground - Chapter 6
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I loved this story series so much. I started it and couldn't stop. I wish you would continue. I'm inspired to try my own similar type of story. I want to try to capture something like what you did here, that dark and beautifully hopeless, ego-shattering submission into pure lust. |
| 2022-02-09 05:13:21 |
Covid Gloryhole Ch 2
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Fun. I'm liking this story. You give her an air of some nice innocence and likability. Let's see where you take her. |