| 2021-02-14 19:41:44 |
Stepmom Godaughter from Portugal. Pt3
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Dolphinman: Please go to a local school like a community college and take a course in English Composition. Your stream of consciousness style may have worked for Kirouac but it doesn't work for you. Your creativity is fine but you are near impossible to read. Please learn and quit stressing your readers. |
| 2021-02-11 20:17:45 |
Stepmom Godaughter from Portugal
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Yes. Good story line but not written well at all. Spelling, grammar and punctuation will help. Good stories are not just sex. |
| 2021-03-06 18:21:04 |
Redemption.
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A real tear jerker NC Fan. Congratulations |
| 2021-06-04 20:23:45 |
My Aunts Big Surprise_(1)
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Good story but confusing when you switch from first person to second and third. it has been almost two years since you submitted this one. Please keep writing - I'm sure you have a lot more stories to tell. |