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Comments from On The Wings Of Maybe
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-20 12:54:08 | An Incest Birthday- The Final Chapter Part 1_(1) | Genuinely more disappointed by the lack of an ending to this than i was at the way game of thrones ended. I hope you come back and finish it at some point Nivek, i became quite invested in Randy & Rita as characters. |
| 2020-04-29 14:41:13 | The French Lesson | I've read both of your posted stories in the past 2 days, excellent work I have to say, honestly if these had been books I'd bought the money would have been well spent. I will read follow ups to either story should you get round to posting them and if you don't well I hope you are at least using your talent for writing in some other aspect of your life. While there weren't many mistakes I did notice a few, they did not detract from my enjoyment however, but if you ever want a second pair of eyes for proof reading give me a shout. Thanks again for the effort. |
| 2020-04-30 04:08:09 | Aunt Jean_(0) | Amazing work, hope the sequel is still coming |
| 2020-05-12 17:53:30 | Being owned - Part 1 | That was when the men suit approached me - man in/wearing the suit “I get the coffee and then we should go somewhere more private. I have a,” he paused, “ delicate but interesting offer.” - I'll get the coffee (not technically an error, just reads better) It seemed like pure luxury to me. A big living room complete with a big couch, a shelf fool of books and a big TV. - a shelf full of books “You will meet your owner tomorrow. - missing " at close of dialogue “Leave your clothes outside the door. You won't need them during your stay bur you will get it back once the deal is completed.” - but you will get it back once the deal is completed.” (also I'd go with them over it or you could say "they'll be returned to you when the deal is completed") Decent start look forward to the rest, apologies for the format & for posting this in the comments but I haven't unlocked PM yet |