| 2019-06-22 21:30:14 |
Anna’s New Career_(1)
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Thanks Impax. Wait for the next installments, maybe you are right about the money; or maybe not, but I can tell you she has some adventures along the way! |
| 2019-06-26 20:47:01 |
Camped out_(1)
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Good story and your descriptions of the characters make them come alive for me. The only thing I would criticise is that it's quite long and so becomes a bit repetitive. Maybe you could divide your stories into a couple of parts, then use this to move the story on so the characters enjoy new situations. |
| 2019-07-18 17:27:03 |
Losing it to a Hooker
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Good story, thanks. Seemed a bit rushed at the end. What if they didn't get dressed and go their separate ways - maybe a trailer for part 2? |
| 2019-07-29 19:26:10 |
The Proposition 1_(2)
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Great story and very credible. |
| 2019-08-07 12:52:35 |
Sugar Momma
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Great story but a very long buildup before Juliaâs secret is revealed. |