| 2018-06-25 17:23:55 |
The Mosquito Burrow
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I encourage you to continue writing. This story would make an interesting video. The mosquitos could have come from another planet or Sebastian a space explorer. The size of the mosquitos and their proboscis going in one inch is a little far-fetched. A little additional explanation for their humongous size may be necessary. Other than that the story is intriguing. Keep up the writing. |
| 2018-06-25 17:24:05 |
The Mosquito Burrow
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I encourage you to continue writing. This story would make an interesting video. The mosquitos could have come from another planet or Sebastian a space explorer. The size of the mosquitos and their proboscis going in one inch is a little far-fetched. A little additional explanation for their humongous size may be necessary. Other than that the story is intriguing. Keep up the writing. |
| 2018-08-08 23:02:50 |
The Mosquito Burrow Part 2
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Good story, yes looks like a winner here. Another sequel in the works. Good idea with the meteorite. Allows the mutations. Experimentation of the eggs and the little swimmers. Sebastian and this girl are forced to have sex and the worms observe the power of Sebastian's sperm. Perhaps the human race is subjugated or does it survive. Good job, bro. |
| 2018-10-27 23:32:04 |
A New Planet, A New Kind Of Life (Final part)
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Good job, I agree could have been a little longer, maybe the mosquitoes attack by using boy's altered semen. As boys ejaculate the worms are put under attack. Mosquitoes could be the heroes of the story. In gratitude the boys let the mosquitoes drink their blood and cum. |