| 2018-01-14 12:43:10 |
Flashing My 2nd Cousin
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LOL @ "He was literally illiterate. Or speechless. Whichever." I'm not making fun. I like that your stories have a stream-of-consciousness feel to them, like you're telling them out loud. What some people might call flaws really add some personality to your writing. |
| 2018-01-21 13:53:29 |
Neighborhood Teen Fun
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Mmm... so hot. Can't wait to read about what they try next! |
| 2018-02-02 12:57:02 |
Sibling Bonding Over Spring Break - Ch. 2 - "Waking Up in Heaven"
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I was waiting for him to finger her pussy... Maybe next time? |
| 2018-02-02 13:09:25 |
Sibling Bonding Over Spring Break - Ch. 3 - "The Shower is Third Base"_(0)
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It's kinda funny that she objects to the word "titties" when her dialogue is so unnatural. (In the last story she said "cover me with semen" -- and who says "semen" in the heat of the moment?) Still, like everyone else, I'm waiting for more. So hot. |