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Comments from truck24000
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-01-17 14:47:00 | THE GIFT_(5) | thanks for the thoughts and criticisms as i am just starting writing stories like these and need all the good as well as bad comments. I can only get better by taken what everyone says and going from there. If you leave a negative vote please let me know why so that i can work on that! |
| 2018-01-23 21:17:15 | the text message | please leave me a comment as to why a negative vote please. its the only way i will know how to improve my writing skills. |
| 2018-01-25 15:34:25 | THE GIFT_(5) | thanks for the great comments .. even the not so great ones. as i will look at the next one and make sure i proof read as well as try not to use the "and" word so much. i don't think i did to bad as I've just started writing stories. just trying to find my style and niche |